I just finished it! I ended up missing out on the point of the anthology I was trying to write for, but I think it's a decent story, or will be once I go through it again and edit it a bit. I was writing for Circlet Press's "Coffee: Hot" anthology, so it needed

1. coffee
2. fantasy
3. sex
4. all their general requirements: sexy people (I assume), happy ending, sex as a positive thing, and so on

I got the coffee and fantasy in all right, but the sex is not the point of the story at all. I think I'll send it in anyway, and if they reject it, there might be some other lesbian fantasy collection I can submit it to.

No more writing for anthologies after this one, though, at least not for a while! I want to continue my Pet Monsters series, and that's not made to anyone's order.

Thank you! :)